tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7708708.post111026126287127071..comments2023-10-28T03:47:08.414-05:00Comments on The Tome of Grey: Snippets in the LiveJournal.Julien Greyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15853940257833214988noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7708708.post-1110606282759644572005-03-12T00:44:00.000-05:002005-03-12T00:44:00.000-05:00Okay more on your words. I want you to know that ...Okay more on your words. I want you to know that I do like it. And I am not trying to be picky, I'm trying to a helpful critic--though you can tell me to shut it anytime you want.<BR/><BR/>The only part I had trouble following was the intro. You may want to elaborate a bit more there. I am easily confused, so perhaps I'm not the target audience. I think a clearer description of the creation, Justice, and the sword would help folks like me follow the rest of the story.<BR/><BR/>I enjoyed it. Good luck.thatweirdgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04982849498446466146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7708708.post-1110486909083097302005-03-10T15:35:00.000-05:002005-03-10T15:35:00.000-05:00Right, so I was reading your words, like them by t...Right, so I was reading your words, like them by the way more on that later, and I thought "oh what fun! a silly little quiz thing!" And do you know what the silly little quiz thing said to me? Do you? <br /><br /><br />I got less than a 22% chance of getting in. How can that silly little quiz know me so well?thatweirdgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04982849498446466146noreply@blogger.com